2011年专四作文作业和修改标准.doc

课后练习1 联想练习，着重强调学生的思路方向的合理性，养成在考试动笔之前广泛的收集可以利用的材料和论据 Topic 1 Where Would You Go after Graduation? Topic 2 Should Students Decide on a Major Before University Studies? Topic 3 The Benefits for Book Reading Today 修改标准： 1 形式：可以以表格的方式出现，或者是spider map，或者是车轮图 2 内容：检查学生的思路范围和方向，有无偏题 检查学生能否画出可以利用在作文里的例子和观点 检查学生能否分出例子和观点的主次 谋篇练习(提纲) Topic 1 Where Would You Go after Graduation? Topic 2 Should Students Decide on a Major Before University Studies? Topic 3 The Benefits for Book Reading Today 修改标准： 1 形式：不拘，但需要有层次 2 内容：有无审错题现象出现 能否列出文章的主题句（thesis statement） 能否列出各个分论点，句子也可，关键词也可 课后练习2： 开头与结尾段落练习 Topic 1 The Benefits for Working as Village Officials Topic 2 My View on Man-Made Beauty Topic 3 How to Get Along with Your Roomates Topic 4 The Importance of Integrity 修改标准： 1 形式：是否采取某种固定开头和结尾模式 是否在开头最后一句话明确提出自己的论点 结尾处是否做出了总结的句子，或者有延伸建议的句子 有无重大语法拼写失误 2 内容：论点是不是合理 论点是否specific 结尾句子中是否对开头主题句做了变相的总结或者改写。 课后练习3 成篇练习 Topic: The Importance of Integrity Topic： Where Would You Go after Graduation? 修改标准： 1．两个题目择其一而作 2. 评分标准 15~14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，几本无语言错误。 13~11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。 11~9分： 基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。 8~6分： 基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。 5分以上： 条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有语法错误，且多数为严重错误。 字数要求：150-170字，扣1分；130-150字，扣2分；110-130字，扣3分；90-110字，.扣4分；90字以下，至多给5分。 另外，如照抄提示中原句，不得计入所写字数。 课后练习4 便条练习 1 You are Dong Feng. You asked Professor Chen for advice on how to write research papers three weeks ago. You feel you have benefited from his help. Write him a note expressing your gratitude. 2 You’ve just moved to a new apartment. Write your friend Shan a note telling him your new address. 3 You have found in the newspaper that there is a position for a teacher of English, and you are eager to get the job. So write a letter applying for it. 4 You, Li Wei, is a sophomore majoring in English in the foreign language department of a university. You want to inquire information about admission to a university