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写作高分作文语言机密 静态动词和动态动词 这些原则一直是我们民族的精神之柱。 a. These principles are the spiritual pillars of our nation. b. These principles have nourished the soul of nation. 2 互相尊重的精神是我们文化合作的基础。 a. The spirit of mutual respect is the basis of our cultural cooperation. b. The framework of mutual respect sustains our own cultural cooperation. 3. 自我形象是看待成功和失败的基础。 a. Self- conception is the basis of one’s attitude towards success and failure. b. Self-conception underlines one’s attitude towards success and failure. 4. 生态失去平衡是野生动植物乃至人类生存的最大威胁。 a. Ecological imbalance is the biggest threat to the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings. b, Ecological imbalance threatens the survival of wildlife, even human beings. 动词机构和抽象名词化 a.. College life makes me feel very excited. b. College life filled me with excitement. a. If you compare two ways of life carefully, you will find the former is superior to the latter. b. Careful comparison of two ways of life will show the superiority of the former over the latter. a. The life style has become accepted and welcomed by more and more young people. b. the life style has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people. a. If we don’t recognize seriously the problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake. b. Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big mistake. a. This incident helps me to understand the nature of human beings deeply. b. This incident deepens my understanding of the nature of human beings. 人物主语和非人物主语 没有几天的功夫，由于抢购，商店里的货卖光了。 Within days, panic buying emptied store shelves. 我害怕起来了，而且越来越害怕。 Then fear set in and commenced to build up. 他疲惫不堪，加上气温越来越高，于是他下定决心一看到阴凉处就坐下休息。 His weariness and increasing heat determined him to sit down in the first convenient shade. 妇女退休后完全过一种家庭生活，她们没有像男的一样感到可怕。 Withdrawal from employment to complete domesticity is a far less threatening experience for a woman than for a man. 大多数人对学生的要求持同情的态度。 There is considerable