初中英语作文常见错误及修改概要.ppt

33.There have many people good at programs. 34. I hope have a girl friend in ten years. (There are many people good at programs.) (I hope to have a good friend in ten years.) 35. I hope I can come true my dream. 36. Ill have many money. ( I hope my dream can come true.) (Ill have a lot of money.) 37. I hope my dream can be come ture. 38.Ill go swimming and running every day. (I hope my dream can come true.) (Ill go swimming and run every day.) 39.Ill dress beautiful. 40..时间状语的介词：in weekdays; in the weekends, in last year, (Ill dress beautifully.) 41.误 My father and my mother is all teacher. 　　 42.误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. 　　 正 My father and my mother are both teachers. 正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. 43.误 The apples cheap. Ill take some. 　　 44.误 Because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting. 　　　　 正 The apples are cheap. Ill take some. 　 正 Because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting. 45.误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 　　 46.误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 　　 正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father. 正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school. 47.例1. When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do. 　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.) 　　　 48.误 When I get to the station the train leave. 　　 　改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do) 　　 正 When I got to the station the train had left. 49.During the holiday， I learned to wrap dumplings. 50.My grandpa sees the gate for a factory. 51.She received the first place in the singing competition. 52.Under the teachers help I worked out the difficult problem. 53.In the afternoon， I played table-tennis with Xiao Ming and I always won him. 54.The man dresses a black coat. 55.The policeman caught the thiefs arm. 56.I very like English. 57.He wastes sleep and forgets meals