大学英语四级写作一概要.ppt

* 8.描写图表的表达方法 It has been shown that… According to the table/diagram/chart, we can see that… The table/diagram/chart has revealed that… The table/diagram/chart can give us some idea of… * 9.描写数据变化的表达方法 From the table/diagram/chart, we can see that the rate of A is higher than B. As can be seen in the table/diagram/chart, there are more A than B. The number of A is as large as B. The number of A has increased sharply from B to C. The number of A is declining dramatically from B to C. * 举例分析 下面是2003年1月大学英语四级考试作文部分的评分标准： It Pays to Be Honest 1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 诚实利人利己，作人应该诚实 * 例文1 － 14points Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake products to their consumers; some students cheat in the exam. Dishonest people are short-sight. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune and even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but * gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. * 点评： 紧扣题目要求的主题，写作思路清晰，前后连贯性好，语言表达通顺、自然，基本上无语言错误 。 * 例文2－11points Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors