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动作（action） Three, illustrate how to complete an action description Situation: the hot summer, the students have just finished the afternoon of the first sports class, sweating profusely, thirsty, want to drink water. Ask your classmates to write a series of actions in which you go to the classroom or go to the canteen to drink water. Guide how to write a specific thing. First of all, think carefully before you write: Conceived in the mind, reproduced like a film, again and again. (conceived) Think: how do you buy water? How do other students buy water? The book shows how the writer wrote the process How do you feel when youre thirsty? What are the other students doing when they are thirsty? How do you write it in books? Second: through repeated repetition and thinking, draw the continuity of this little action. (decomposition) Buy water from the playground to the canteen 1, from the playground to the canteen (1) how do you pass by the playground? 2) how did you go through the steps? (3) how did you pass by the basketball court? 2, take water from the canteen to drink water (1) how do you get into the canteen when you reach the entrance of the canteen? (2) take mineral water (or drink) (3), how to open the bottle (4), and how to drink it? (5) how about after drinking?. What are the key actions to describe in this scene? Run drink How to run? How to drink? Should be the focus. How do you describe these two movements? Third: select verbs to describe. (accurate) At this point, use your head and compare the words stored in your mind. If it is at ordinary times, you can also find tools, books, famous masterpieces to find. (choose the most confident words that you know best) to express 1, first said how to run to the canteen this action. I walk to the grocery store and I run to the canteen. This is what everyone wants, nothing special. We write articles to be accurate and vivid, that is, to reflect in you think of others can not think of things, it is really Kung fu. What