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读 写 任 务 写 作 （25分） 主题句的模式 1 引出经历 2 重述要点 3 回答要点 4 明示观点 5 引出建议、原因、方法、措施等 引出经历/重述要点/回答要点/明示观点/引出建议、措施 * * * 台山市更开中学 高三（3）班 伍丹萍 阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 A teacher was giving a lecture to his students on stress management. He raised a glass of water and asked the students, “How heavy do you think this glass of water is?”… … We have to put down our burdens periodically, so that we can refresh ourselves and be able to carry on…. Whatever burdens you are carrying now on your shoulders, let them down for a moment if you can. Pick them up again later when you have rested. [写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2.以约120个词谈谈你对如何减压的想法，内容包括： （1）简述目前中学生面临的压力； （2）这些压力给中学生带来的危害有哪些； （3）介绍自我减压的心得或建议。 《英语周报第8期》 Nowadays, the students don’t have enough sleep so they always feel sleepy in the class. What’s more, they have little time to take part in the after-school activities. （1）简述目前中学生面临的压力； （2）这些压力给中学生带来的危害有哪些？ These burdens will do harm to our physical and mental health.… 没有一个明确的主题句。 At present, senior students face lots of stresses which come from their parents, teachers or classmates…. Every coin has two sides. The stress is beneficial to our study. It can make us study hard… 概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰。 写作内容 (20分): 主题明确，内容丰富 2007-2013的广东高考卷中，都给出三条内容要点。 因读写任务“写作内容”所列要点的顺序已具有内在的逻辑性，所以考生应该按照试题所给内容要点顺序写作。一般是每个写作要点安排为一个自然段，且将写作内容的每个要点作为各段的主题句，将主题句放在各段的开头，这样既可以避免考生在写作时跑题或遗漏要点，又方便阅卷老师落实要点是否齐全 。 一、引出经历 1.时间、地点和起因。【讲述一次想家的经历】（11广东） Like Sam, each of us may ____________ ___________________ missing our family, ____________(包括我在内). 2. 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。 1) I once ____________________ doing a part-time job in a summer vacation. 2) This ______________ an unforgettable experience of my part-time job. have the experience of me included had an experience of reminds me of 二、重述要点 题干要求说明某事的重要性、意义、差别、利弊等，这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问，而是翻译题干要点作为段落的主题句，具体回答则通过其后的拓展句体现。例如： 1）要点是“谈谈