经历感受类.ppt

Teaching aims(教学目标): 掌握经历感受类作文的写作顺序。 学会使用一些与时间相关的副词或时间状语等把要点合理连贯地连接在一起。 学会运用非谓语动词、从句连接所给出的信息。 掌握表达感受的常见句式。 L/O/G/O 1.经历感受类三水中学 郭春霞 (2012.3.30) 基础写作 March 8, Thursday Fine Today we paid a visit to a farm called Red Star. Early in the morning we gathered at the school gate and went there together by bus. After an hour’s bus ride, we arrived at the farm, where we were given a warm welcome. Soon after we got off the bus, the head of the farm showed us around. At noon we had a picnic lunch, after which we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. It was an unforgettable trip, because we not only learned more about crops and vegetables but also had a good time. 经历感受类基础写作的特点： 人称： 时态： 顺序： 常用高级句式： 第一人称 一般过去时（动词过去式） 按时间/活动开展的先后顺序 非谓语动词、从句 On Saturday, November 8th, 2008, I ______ (work) as a volunteer at Lee Apple Farm with John from England, Sinba from India, Keith from America and another 14 students. The farm ___ (be) about 60 kilometers to the northwest of our school. We _____(take) a bus at 8:00 am and ______(walk) for 15 minutes after getting off the bus an hour later. As a tornado ______(strike) the farm a few days ago, we _____(have) to pick up apples, telling good apples from bad ones and put them into baskets. Although (we were all very) tired after work, we _____(feel) it meaningful. worked is took walked struck had felt 技巧一：正确使用一般过去时。 1.We were about to set off ______(这时) it began to rain. 2. _______ had he finished his speech ______ the audience started cheering. (一……就……) 3.____________(一到达), we began to work immediately. 4. _____(首先) we saw a variety of marine life ________ (然后) watched the fantastic performance of dolphins. 5.________________________(……之后不久) we arrived, the head of the farm showed us around. 6. ______________________(在春节期间), I attended a ten-day winter camp in Beijing University. 7._________________(短暂的休息之后) we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. 8.Though I