2012最新高考英语写作书面表达提升分类分析.docVIP

写作提升（一）---记叙文 记叙文为高考书面表达重点考查体裁之一，记叙文以记人、叙事、描写景物为主要内容，通常用第一人称和第三人称，其时态也常用过去时态。叙述时应注意目的明确，重点突出以及事情的完整性与顺序性。 【典题示例】【2011曲阜模拟】 你今年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）／麦当劳（McDonald’s）快餐店做保洁员 （cleaner）工作。你每天工作七个小时，为期3周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥，你感到非常疲劳，几乎半途而弃。每天你都要起早贪黑的工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于完成了这项工作，并由此认识到了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。 注意：1．必须使用第一人称； 2．词数120【审题谋篇】 1.本篇为记叙文，为常考体裁，目的为通过在快餐店打工的经历说明劳动的意义。 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态和语态：打工经历------一般过去时态 体会感想------一般现在时态 4.写作要点： ①说明打工的缘由。 ②阐述打工经历与感受。 ③体会打工的收获，即劳动的意义。 【常用模板】 Ⅰ.格式模板： 开头：During the summer holidays, I thought … 正文：The job was … and I had to …everyday. 结尾：I understand ..., and it’s really... Ⅱ.句式模板： 1.陈述计划、打算： ①Want/intend/prefer to do sth. ②Rather thando/Instead of doing…,…prefer to do. 2.体现工作艰辛： ①find the job hard/boring/endless ②It’s so tiring that… 【尝试运用】 1.我想我应该做一些有意义的事情，而不是呆在家里无所事事。 I thought Ishould do something meaningful. and I don’t want to stay at home.（合并为一个句子） I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home. 2.这份工作辛苦、枯燥，这使我很疲惫，几乎中途放弃。 一般表达方法： I felt very tired and almost gave it up halfway, because the job was hard and boring. 高级表达方式： The job was hard and boring, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. 3.我明白了劳动的意义，认为这是一次成功经历。 I understand what labour means, and think it really a successful experience.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空） During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of stay at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant/an McDonalds and worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for three weeks. The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I studied for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally, I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand what labour means, I think it is really a successful experience. 【跟踪演练】 王太太决定带儿子去北京旅游，儿子听到后很是高兴，可是当他们准备出发时，突然发现一个问题，聪明的儿子想出一个主意……请根据这六幅图，用英语概述这一经过。 注意： 1. 文章要包括六幅图中