unit 21 看图叙事 高考英语作文.ppt

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。 注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs 审中文信息 标题 图的顺序不能错！ 词数 提示词 第一人称过去时 图1. 出发图2. 种树过程 图3. 安插提示牌 图4. 照相留念 ??? 审图 四幅图的先后顺序： 图1内容要点及细节 要点 出发 细节 4月12日 清晨 骑车出发 去郊区 风景和心情 Set out Early in the morning on April 12th； suburbs; by bike； talking and laughing 图2内容要点及细节 要点 种树 细节 挖坑 搬树 种树 浇水 plant trees arrive; dig holes; carry trees; water trees; 图3内容要点及细节 要点 安插提示牌 细节 安插提示牌 爱护树木 put up a board put up a board saying ”please protect trees” 图4内容要点及细节 要点 照相留念 细节 手里拿着种树工具 站在小树林和牌子旁 心情或感受 take photos take photos; stand in a row with tools in hands; beside the board and trees 顺序 要点 要点的细节支撑 连接词 Picture 1 set out early in the morning; on April 12th； suburbs; by bike； early in the morning Picture 2 plant trees arrive; dig holes; carry trees; water trees; as soon as we arrived at the planting spot; when we reached …； upon arrival Picture 3 put up a board put up a board saying ”please protect trees” afterwards; after finishing planting all the trees; Picture 4 take photos take photos; stand in a raw with tools in hands; beside the board and trees before leaving; in order to treasure the activity Ending: 累，但是认为有意义/有成就感 保护、美化环境是每个人的责任 Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 点评 Green Action in Our Class I am Li Hua from Class 1 Senior 3 in HongXing middle school. On April 12th our class organized an activity to plant trees in suburbs to make our country more beautiful. Early in the morning on April 12th, my classmates and I went to the suburbs by bicycle. And there was an awful lot of breath-taking scenery on our way which could be just appreciated in rural areas, green mountains, golden wheat field and so on, which brought us great joys. 覆盖了所有内容要点，有细节描述，句式和词汇较丰富，所写内容连贯，结构清晰，体现较强的语言运用能力。 When