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思想评论:论刺激-On Stimulations 论刺激 【内容提示】 近些年，社会上有一种现象，那就是人们动不动就想寻找刺激，有物质刺激、精神刺激等。公益之事没有物质奖不干。集体主义淡漠了，个人利益的风气增长了。请你就这一问题写一篇文章，发表自己的看法。 以下词语供参考： 1．stiulatin n．刺激（作用） 2．sial phenenn 社会现象 3．lletivis n．集体主义 【作文示范】 n Stiulatins In reent ears, re and re peple are seeing fr stiulatins This sial phenenn has als spread idel ang us students Last ee, it as ur lass＇ turn t lean the shl apus This tie, in rder t aruse ur enthusias fr the labr, ur lassaster annuned that thse h attended the labr uld get se ind f aterial reards① Althugh everne ne the reards uld be uniprtant in ters f ne, t thirds f the students in ur lass attended the labr, as the felt the gt a ind f stiulatin fr it H uniaginable it as! h shuld suh things happen? an ears ag, it as regarded as an hnur t serve the peple and siet But in reent ears, althugh siet, siene, and tehnlg have been greatl develped and ur living nditins have been iprved, se peple feel lnel and spirituall② ept hile seeing persnal interests and fae, the have bee uh re self-entered Finall the lse tuh ith the lletive③ The nl d things that an benefit theselves B and b the feel lnel even ith a lt f aterial frts This is h the ust see fr re stiulatins t heer up theselves Seeing fr aterial stiulatins is nt a prper a t get rid f lneliness A better a ut is t are re fr the lletive and thers nl b this eans an the get ba hat the have lst b aviding sial ativities Fr us ung peple, besides ur studies, e als need lletive ativitiesIn taing part in these ativities, nt nl an ur lives be enrihed④, but e an als train ur sense f lletivis and thus be spirituall rearded S h dn＇t e als l fr se spiritual stiulatin, fell students? 【词语解释】 reard[ri＇:d] n．报酬；酬劳；奖赏 spirituall[＇spiritu+li] ad．精神上；心灵上 lletive[+＇letiv] n．集体；集体事业 enrih[in＇rit]v．使富裕；使丰富 【写法指要】 本文的论点是“seeing fr spiritual stiulatins instead f aterial nes”（寻求精神刺激而不要寻求物质刺激），这是从整篇文章中归纳出来的。全文运用多种推理方法对这一论点进行论证。作者在第一段提出问题；第二、三段用事例法论证某些学生为得到一点物质刺激而参加集体劳动；第四段用归纳法论证物质丰富而精神空虚的原因；第五、六段用演绎法论证青年人应该关心集体和他人的道理，我们可以从这两段总结出作者的三段式推理过程： 大前提：大