英语写作要领.doc

英语写作要领 英语写作要领 一. 中国式英语 1. 汉式表达(chinglish way of expression) (错)however, everything has its black side. (对)however, there are two sides to everythingeverything has its drawbackseverything has its pros and cons nothing is perfect. 2.In a word, I want to find a job that fits me,and money and other things are out of thought. In a word, I want to find a job that suits me, and money and other things are not my chief concern 2. People now have condition to eat good things. People now can afford nutritious food high-quality food is now within people?s reach. 3. Just open the TV set, you can know everything,and won?t have to go out. Simply by switching on the TV set, you can learn everything without having to go out. 4. TV can widen our eyes. watching TV can broaden our minds horizons. 5. we young people are now live in sugar water. we young people now live a comfortable life. 二. 汉式 “有” 的概念 1. The chief reason for the change have five points There are five reasons for the change. 2. Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that Shanghai have over ten million people. Traffic is a serious problem, and one of the reasons is that there are over ten million people in Shanghai. 三. 汉式 “后”的概念 (错) after its big libraries, what Fudan University attracts me is its modern laboratories. Second only to its big libraries, the attraction of Fudan University for me is its modern laboratories. (错) Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up after 50 years. (对) Some natural resources such as oil and coal will be used up in 50 years. (错) after four years, they graduated from the university. Four years later, they graduated from the university. 四. 汉式 “越来越少”的概念 (错)Nowadays, young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.(对) Nowadays, more and more young people are seeking to go abroad. (错)People begin to eat grain less and less,while they eat fruit more and more.(错)with the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less. (对)with the developm