四六项大学英语写作突破.pptVIP

3) End with a prediction or recommendation Like questions, predictions and recommendations also involve your readers. A prediction states what may happen in the future. Example: If people stopped to think before acquiring pets, there would be fewer instances of cruelty to animals. Many times, it is the people who adopt pets without considering the expense and responsibility involved who mistreat and neglect their animals. Pets are living creatures. They do not deserve to be treated as carelessly as one would treat a stuffed toy. A recommendation suggests what should be done about a situation or problem. Example: Disappointments are unwelcome, but regular, visitors in everyones life. We can feel depressed about them, or we can try to escape from them. The best thing, though, is to accept a disappointment and then try to use it somehow: step over the unwelcome visitor and then get on with life. 4. Four Bases for Revising Essays Four Steps Four Bases 1. If you advance a single point and stick to that point, your paper will have unity. 2. If you support the point with specific evidence, your paper will have support. 3. If you organize and connect the specific evidence, your paper will have coherence. 4. If you write clear, error-free sentences, your paper will demonstrate effective sentence skills. 4.1 统一性 段落只有一个中心思想，写在该段的主题句里。扩展句必须从属于这个中心，围绕这一主题来展开，即一个段落只论述和说明一个主题或一个主题的一个方面，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都不要出现。为了达到这一要求，必须精心选择相应的素材，并按照一定的逻辑去组织安排素材。 例如： A basic factor that must be considered is the age of the child. Theoretically a child is anyone aged zero years to approximately eighteen. A pre-school child is incapable of making independent decisions and is necessarily dependent on his／her family to determine and impose rules of behaviour. As the child‘s age increases, the everyday rules that were instilled at an early age should become automatic. As a child moves into adolescence, he／she is often expected and encouraged to negotiate some rules of behaviour with parents an