2013年大兴区初三一模作文《春风拂面》分析（The analysis of the 2013 Daxing District junior spring breeze the first mock exam.）.docVIP

2013年大兴区初三一模作文《春风拂面》分析（The analysis of the 2013 Daxing District junior spring breeze the first mock exam.） The analysis of the 2013 Daxing District junior spring breeze the first mock exam. Edited by Jiang Tuowang, President of Beijing Education Analysis: writing this article has to be done emotionally. Specifically: a? From the spring of the original meaning of the pen, the scenery description is the main expression, highlight the blowing spring breeze relaxed fun. Two? From the spring breeze Metaphors in the event as the fundamental, to show the humanistic environment and good social atmosphere to bring their own happiness. No matter what content is chosen, it is necessary to skillfully combine the spring breeze of nature. The article can be taken out of the warm spring breeze, gentle breeze can pack in the spring breeze, also can make it as a clue, a piece of string moving story. Writing ideas 1, take the spring breeze as the clue. Write in different places, the spring breeze, to their own afterlife, the same feeling of happiness. 2. Catch a little thing. Write parents, teachers of their spring like love. For words, we should try to avoid repeating words, and use synonyms as much as possible to choose the most accurate, vivid and vivid words. (the accumulation is very important at ordinary times); For the sentence, the sentence is short, the sentence is staggered, and the whole sentence is combined. It shows the beauty of change, the beauty of rhythm and the beauty of tonality; For rhetoric, the use of appropriate and skillful can effectively enhance the expressiveness and appeal of language. Such as the use of parallelism sentence, can enhance the beauty of language and expression, the expansion of content; use a metaphor, not only can make the abstract concept concrete sense, but also make the prose narrative or argument is vivid. A spring breeze blowing over Lonely childhood, there is no imagination of grass, blue sky, there is no dream gorgeous palaces, there