同等学力英语写作.ppt

读后感 写英语文读后感的思路和中文读后感是一样的，相差的只是对语言的驾驭能力。 引，议，结 引（引出原文相关内容，语言简洁，要与感想内容有关。例如：你感想是写勇敢的，就不要引到了友情之类的） 议（对引出的内容进行议论，围绕中心来写） 结（对全文进行总结，写出自己的感想，如有可能，引上相关的名言。） 如何让你的文章更有亮点 书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求： （1）应用了较多的语法结构或词汇； （2）语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； （3）有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。 一、词汇选择 ?在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。 ?1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。 ?A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street 2)在周末我们做很多作业。 A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do. B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do. 5)表示比较 After months of living in a tropical climate, Spain seemed cool by comparison. By comparison with other European countries, car prices in the UK are very high. 5)表示比较 Many business people do not know what sexual harassment is. Equally important, they do not know how to prevent it. The deaf children of hearing parents are almost normal in comparison, having everything except language experience. 5)表示比较 I don’t want him treating me like Jim treated me. The clams蛤肉were delicious. Likewise, the eggplant was excellent. The cost of food and clothing has come down in recent years. Similarly, fuel prices have fallen quite considerably. 6)表示让步 admittedly, all the same, even so, although, certainly, clearly, in spite of, nevertheless仍然(还)，不过 (尽管如此)还是，然而, still, 6)表示让步 The technique is painful, admittedly, but it benefits the patient greatly. I realize she can be very annoying, but I think you should apologize all the same. 6)表示让步 We decided to take rooms in Longwood House, although we knew we could not really afford the rent. We are especially well-treated, certainly not as well as the locals. (certainly the case that...but...虽然很对,可是) 6)表示让步 Clearly, the racial problems in America have no easy answers. The fines for speeding are large, but even so, they are not always a deterrent威慑. But in spite of the hardships, real efforts and progress are being made. 6)表示让步 A false belie