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“书面表达” 命题依据及原则 依据教育部《课程标准》、《全国统一考试大纲（课程标准实验版）》、浙江省高中英语新课程《学科教学指导意见》 《2011考试说明》：考生应能（1）清楚连贯地传达信息，表达意思；（2）有效运用所学语言知识。根据提示，用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。 话题（主题）：跟高中学生学习生活有关的，或是他们关心的，但热点问题的可能性仍较小。 写作任务：有意义的，或者实用的（能解决实际问题的） 语言知识：高中所学词汇、语法项目、语篇知识（写作方法） 假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议理由：?????? 1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；?????? 2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心；?????? 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境；?????? 4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。?注意：1．词数100左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：明确的(definite)?? 评价（estimation） 审 题 字 词 文 Students’ version ---- 许丹妮 …However, the path to college may not be smooth. So we should try our best to do something best in order to welcome the National College Entrance Examination. There goes a saying that more haste, less speed. Therefore, we’d better to keep a positive attitude. Not only can we calm down, but also we will get courage to overcome difficulties. In other words, we will believe there are many promising avenues to pursue. Practice makes perfect ! NOTICE All the students of Senior 3 in Xinguang Middle School will have a physical check-up in the 1st People’s Hospital. The physical check-up will be held on Wednesday, 19th October. All the students must meet at the gate of the hospital, getting there by bicycle or on foot. You are not allowed to have anything before the check-up. And by the way, you should keep quiet there waiting for the check-up and follow the doctors and the nurses， please.[78 words] 看图作文的写作方法 1.以一图两为的方式进行写作 2. 巧用连词的前后呼应 3. 叙述事件过程用过去时， 谈论自身看法用现在时 1. 以时间为主线 2. 以动作顺序为写作主线 3. 也可夹叙夹议的方式 4. 一种时态为主，多为过去时 记叙文的写作方法： 图表题示写作方法 1. 不同观点分开写，最好分段写 2. 注意连词褒贬搭配，语气恰到好处 3. 首段提出事由论点，主体两段摆论 据，叙述理由； 4. 尾段必须陈述自己的观点； 5. 巧用成语重意义匹配，分数要上档次 英语成语与谚语 Roman is not built one day. When in Rome, do as Romans do. Don’t count your eggs before they are hatched. Never cry over the split milk. There’re two rabbits fighting each other in your heart. He looks like a cat on a