天津市第十六中学写作课.ppt

基本写作训练 仿写 imitation 1.最基础的仿写———替换个别词或词组 2.模仿一些好的句型结构 3.可以模仿作者的思路或篇章结构 仿写一：最基础的仿写———替换个别词或词组 1.我是一个中年教师，在九十六中学教书，我叫Molly。 (middle age) 2.我是一名儿童医院的医生，我50岁了，我叫王明 (Children’s hospital） I am Molly, a teacher of middle age teaching in the No.96 middle school. I am Lijin, a schoolgirl of sixteen studying in Xinhua Middle school. 我是一个女学生，今年十六岁，我在新华中学学习，我叫李津. I am Wangming, a doctor of fifty working in the Children’s hospital. I am Lijin, a schoolgirl of sixteen studying in Xinhua Middle school. 我是一个女学生，今年十六岁，我在新华中学学习，我叫李津. The meeting will be held on March 26th of 2014 in the No. 311 room . 1.这个生日聚会在2014年5月2日二班举办。 2.下一届奥运会将会在2016年的8月5号巴西举办。 （Olympic games Brazil） The birthday party will be held on May 2nd of 2014 in class two. The next Olympic games will be held on August 5th of 2016 in Brazil. The meeting will be held on March 26th of 2014 in the No 311 room . . 这个会议将在2014年的3月26号311房间举行。 I will appreciate it very much if you can offer me the opportunity. 1.我会非常感激的如果你们能按时到达学校大门口。 2.如果你们能选我，我会非常非常感激的。 （vote for extremely） I will appreciate it very much if you can get to the school gate on time. I will extremely appreciate it if you can vote for me. I will appreciate it very much if you can offer me the opportunity. 如果您能给我一个机会我会非常感激的。 1.与小城镇相比，大城市太拥挤。 2. 与健康相比，金钱就不那么重要。 仿写二：模仿一些好的句型结构 Compared with small towns, big cities are too crowded. Compared with maths, English needs more time to remember. Compared with health, money is not so important. Compared with maths, English needs more time to remember. 与数学相比，英语需要更多的去记忆。 I have an interest in plenty of things, of which football is my favorite. Tianjin has plenty of snacks, of which Gou Buli is famous in the whole country. 1.天津有很多小吃，其中狗不理包子全国闻名。 (snack Gou Buli) 2.我们现在有很多环境问题，其中雾霾最严重。 (smog pollution) We have plenty of environmental problems, of which the smog pollution is the worst . I have an interest in