年第周高考英语作文赏析图表作文.doc

高考英语作文赏析(图表作文) 作文一： Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 上海市正提倡建设“节约型社会”，下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情况。请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。 According to the graph, this school, the epitome of all the schools in Shanghai, didn’t have a good control of its water and electricity use. The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to 75, both of which demand our prompt attention. As a citizen, my suggestions to develop Shanghai into an economized society are listed as follows. To begin with, lights should be turned off when no one is in the room. The mentioned “room” ranges from classroom to home in definition. Fans are highly recommended to replace air-conditioners in summer time. In addition, water is encouraged to be recycled if possible. Finished using in dish-washing, water can be used in toilet-flushing. Creative minds are appreciated in using water in different purposes. What’s more, clothing bags ought to substitute for paper bags in daily life. The behavior of bringing one’s paper bag to the supermarket contributes to terminating white pollution. Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well. rds)? 审题： 本文是非常典型的图表材料议论文。此类体裁的写作首先要求作者能够细致、全面地观察图片，能够从图片中得到关于论点乃至于论据的信息，这样，作文就有了成功的基础。比如本图表，我们可以从中得知一个最明显的结论：该学校下半学期的用水、用电和用纸量都比上半学期多。接下来，应该重点围绕“How to build an economized society”，提出自己认为可行的解决方法。最后进行归纳总结。 高级词汇及短语： epitome 缩, terminate 终止 多样句型： 非限制性定语从句1）The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to 75, both of which demand our prompt attention；2）Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well. 作文二： Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to