广东高考英语作文提出建议.ppt

* 主题： 给交友有困难的同学提建议。 I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. [引出建议] Here are some tips to help you. [列举建议] First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, (理由) which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally， you should try to join in a discussion, (理由) letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you find these ideas useful. 一、篇章结构 引出建议 → 列举建议与理由(→ 希望) 二、句式模板 1.引出建议可以用： ⑴ Here are my suggestions on how to ... ⑵ Suggestions on ... can be listed as follows. ⑶ The ways for you to ... can be suggested as follows. 2.列举建议可以用： ⑴ first of all/first/to begin with；second (ly)/then/besides/in addition/what’s more；finally/lastly/last but not least ⑵ for one thing ...and for another (thing) 3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。 三、语篇模板 It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy. [引出] The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows. [列举] Firstly, we should have a healthy diet, which means a variety of food including meat, fresh fruits and vegetables. Secondly, drink more water instead of a lot of drinks. Lastly, do some exercise every day, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on, for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot. 二、基础写作 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助： [写作内容] 请根据以上帖子内容, 给Grow-up回贴, 并包括以下要点： 1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)； 2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲； 3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议: 多与母亲交流; 行动上证明自己已成年。 Hi, Grown-up， ... Hi, Grown-up， As a student of your age, I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers. However, you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelin