2018年高考英语一轮复习 写作技法点拨系列8 揣摩内涵, 从容掌控图画作文课件 外研版.pptVIP

写作技法点拨系列 八、揣摩内涵, 从容掌控图画作文 【核心点拨】 常用句型 1. 用于描述图画或引入话题的句式 (1)As is described in the picture, . . . (2)From the picture we can see that. . . (3)The purpose of the picture is to. . . (4)The picture indicates/conveys the meaning. . . 2. 用于记叙事件经过或分析现象 (1)At first. . . then. . . five minutes later. . . finally/in the end/at last. . . (2)Some. . . ; some. . . ; others. . . (3). . . was/were doing. . . when suddenly sb. /sth. did. . . 3. 发表议论或总结 (1)If such measures were not taken, the problem of. . . would have been more serious. 如果没有采取这样的措施, ……的问题会更加严重。 (2)Unless there is a common realization of. . . , it is very likely that. . . 除非达成共识, 否则……将会…… (3)We can conclude from this picture that. . . 由这幅图画我们可以推断出…… (4)As has been stated above, we must attach more importance to. . . 如上所述, 我们必须更加重视…… 【典题示例】 (2016·北京高考) 　　假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序, 以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题, 给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件, 介绍活动的全过程。 【审题谋篇】 1. 介绍学校的“地球日”系列活动; 2. 我们班的具体活动过程; 3. 活动的意义及感受。 信息要点 一般过去时 主要时态 第一人称we 中心人称 记叙文 文章体裁 【词句构建】 1. 词汇 ____________ change. . . with 交流观点、经验 ____________ think of 想出(办法) ______ ask, order 要求, 号召 高级词汇 一般词汇 汉　语 call up come up with share. . . with 2. 句式 ①学校里到处贴满了海报, 要求我们加入“地球日”活动。 一般表达: Our school put up posters everywhere and asked us to join in the actions for a greener earth. 高级表达: _________________ around our school, _____________to join in the actions for a greener earth. (用被动语态代替主动语态; 动词-ing形式作状语) Posters were put up calling upon us ②我们班想出了利用废弃材料的主意。 一般表达: Our class thought of the idea to use used materials. 高级表达: Our class ____________the idea to _____ ___________used materials. (用高级词汇代替think of, use) came up with make better use of ③我们做得很出色, 所以被邀请和学校的其他学生交流观点和经验。 一般表达: We did very well, so we were invited to change our ideas and experiences with all the students of our school. 高级表达: We did __________we were invited to share our ideas and experiences with all the students of our school. (用结果状语从句) so well that 【连句成篇】 Actions for