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湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载（9）及参考范文 【广东省茂名市基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) 假设你的同学因自己的肥胖而苦恼，请根据以下建议写一篇英语短文。 [写作内容] Don’ts Dos 不要吃过多油腻的食物；睡觉前不要吃零食。否则可能增加体重或消化不良(indigestion)。 要保持均衡饮食；每天需要至少一个小时的运动，比如可以选择步行上学，这样既有利于减肥，又可以保护环境。 做到持之以恒，只有这样才会在不久的将来拥有苗条的身材。 [写作要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 首句已经给出，不计入总句数。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。 Dear classmate, I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分) I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions. On (the) one hand, you shouldnt eat too much fatty food or eat snacks before you sleep. Otherwise, you may gain weight or suffer from indigestion. On the other hand, you should keep a balanced diet. Meanwhile, doing exercise for at least one hour per day is needed, like walking to school, which is not only beneficial for your weight loss, but also helps protect the environment. Above all, you should be persistent, because only in this way can you become slim in the near future. 【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫的学生，你看到如下内容。请你根据内容、写作要点和要求。 写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法；??????????????? 2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）； 3. 提出至少两条建议要求： 1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。?2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。? 4. 书写需清晰、工整。书面表达（满分30分）This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting; instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it. In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality. As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask