2018高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练.docVIP

专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误 [真题演练](2017·全国卷Ⅲ)of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes me many happy memories of your high school days. 答案： grown not only physically， also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was ，I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planeslaying pop music，and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days. 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。解析：词法错误。realize“认识到意识到”是及物动词后面直接跟宾语。答案：去掉of解析：句法错误。由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。答案：had改为have解析：行文逻辑错误。not only...but also...“不仅……而且……”连接并列成分。and改为but解析：句法错误。被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”的过去分词是taken。答案：took改为taken解析：句法错误。句子用了过去时连接并列谓语entered和became。答案：become改为became解析：词法错误。picture在文中第一句已经出现过故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this表示“在这张照片中”。答案：in后加this/the解析：句法错误。things是先行词后面是定语从句从句中缺少主语故引导词用that或which。答案：they改为that/which解析：词法错误。形容词修饰名词kinds。答案：difference改为different解析：词法错误。the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。latest“最近的最新的”。答案：late改为latest解析：行文逻辑错误。句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高答案：your改为my(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)ur area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 答案： I live.Though not very