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一．The journey was long and tired. We left London at five o’clock in the evening and spend eight hours in the train. We had been travelled for 3 hours after someone appeared selling food and drinks. It was darkness all the time we were crossing Wales, but we could see nothing through the windows. When we finally arrived Holyhead nearly everyone was slept. As soon as the train stopped, everybody tome tolife, grabbing their suitcases and rushing onto the platform. 　　1. _______ 2. _______ 3. _______4. _______ 5. _______ 6. _______ 7. _______ 8. _______ 9. _______10. _______ 　Key： 　　1.将tired改为tlrmg。tmng令人劳累的。 　　2.属时态错误。将spend改为spent。 　　3.去掉been。为主动语态。 　　4.affter改为before。 　　5.将darkness改为dark。 　　6.butd(为so从卜下丈可知。 　　7.在arrive后加in或at。 　　8.slept改为sleeping。过去进行时。 　　9.come改为canle。从上文时态可知。 　　10.正确。 二． The first man set foot on the moon was an American calling Neil Armstorng. He landed on the moon with Edwin Aldrin in July 21, 1969 in the lunar module [(飞船)舱]. Whe they were made the famous moon-walk, millions of people watched them through the television. They stayed on the moon for about 21.5 days. Then they took off with their lunar module and joined Michael Collins in the command module. Armstrong and Aldrin brought back some dust and rock from the moon to further the scientific studies in the moon. They didn’t find any life on the moon. 　　1. _______ 2. _______ 3. _______ 　　4. _______ 5. _______ 6. _______ 　　7. _______ 8. _______ 9. _______ 　　10. _______ 　1.在man后加who(that)。为定语从句。 　　2.calling改为called。“名叫……”用过去分词called。 　　3.将in改为。no表示在某日用介词。 　　4.正确。 　　5.made改为making。为过去进行时。 　　6.去掉the.看电视watch TV，TV前不用冠词。 　　7.将days改为hours。days不符。 　　8.with改为in，意为“乘坐登月舱”。 　　9.rock改为rocks。 　　10.把in改为of。意为“进一步对月球的研究”，studies为名词，后用of。 三． 　Calvin Coolidge, 30th president of the United States, was famous for a man of few words. He knew what he should talk and when he should not. It was very hard of anyone to enjoy talking with him. One evening he was inviting to dinner. A lady sitting next to him pas