英语教学优化句子的四种常用方法.ppt

Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Henan Normal University last year. Zhang Hai , male, 23 years old, graduated from Henan Normal University last year. 2. I am good at drawing. I can speak English very well. Not only am I good at drawing ,but I can also speak English well. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest. It will be held on June 5. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held on June 5. 4. 他病得很重，这让我着急。 [一般] He was seriously ill. It made me worried. [高级] That he was seriously ill made me worried. He was seriously ill, which made me worried. What made me worried was that he was seriously ill. * * 课前热身 书面表达中常出现的单词拼写错误汇总 writing invite invitation modern interested always appreciate grateful member convenient environment true hold --- held ----held speak--spoke ---spoken teach--- taught ---- taught I’m writing to invite you to the English speech contest to be held in our school next Friday. I really hope you can accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 优化句子的四种常用方法 Learning objective: Learn to use some basic means to make your language better while you are writing a composition 优化句子的四种常用方法 一、同位语手段 二、运用并列句 三、运用短语 四、运用从句 同位语手段 此方法多用于介绍人物，事物, 地点等 [例1]介绍人物（2010新课标全国卷） 姓名：李华 身份：育才中学学生 职位：学生会主席 校址:你们大学附近 I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. [例2] 介绍事物 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 Zhengzhou is the capital of Henan province. It is located in the middle of Henan province. It is the culture and economy center of Henan province. Zhengzhou, the capital and the culture and economy center of Henan province, is located in the middle of Henan. [例3] 介绍地点 (翻译)李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。 运用 Li Min, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best fr