《Grammar课件》初中英语人教2001课标版九年级全一册课件1182.pptVIP

初三英语专项复习--写作讲评课 北航附中 阿荣高娃 2012 What do these numbers represent? 60 80 180 195 210 the number of words required in the writing in the High School Entrance Examination in 2011: no less than 60 words the number of words required in this writing: 80 words or so the numbers of words in your writings (14 lines ×10-15words per line =140-210 words) Problem- 1 超字数 Too many words Class Assessment -Ⅰ But we still have something to do. Here are some of the ways. First, water is very important in our life, so we should use it atteniontively. Don’t waste water in our life. Second, planting trees is also good for our city. The more trees we plant, the fresher air we’ll have. Third, in order to protect our environment, we’d better ride a bike to school rather than drive to school. Fourth, we are supposed to throw different kinds of grabage to different garbage boxes. What’s more, when we are going shopping, we can also use the bags which can be helpful to the environment protecting instead of using plastic bags. Our civilized city is so important that we must go on working hard to protect it. Do these now and make our city more beautiful and energetic! Problem- 2 直接拼凑 simply put together 内容不够紧凑 loose structure 缺乏内在逻辑 lack of logic Class Assessment -Ⅱ As proud Beijingers, it is our inescapable responsibility to persist on making efforts to better our city. By riding bikes to and from school and planting trees in our spare time, we can contribute to the decrease of the concentration of PM2.5. Trivial everyday acts such as turning off the tap, carrying environmental-friendly bags as well as garbage classification are sure to make a difference. Every human being is needed for environmental protection, for which there is no doubt for us to do everything in our power. 87 words Analysis and classification of given information. contribute to the concentration of PM 2.5 trivial everyday activities Peer AssessmentRead, discuss and give suggestions. Analysis a