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改错专练2015 一 For the first time in my life I was interviewed by an university professor for a teaching position at a high school .I was very excited that as soon as we sat down I started to introduce myself in English before asked . But to my surprise . I saw ,out of the corner of his eye, that the professor was becoming impatient .He said my spoken English was contained too much bad idioms and non-American expressions . I felt hurt and discouraging .I stood up in silence and made to the door .Now three years has passed ,so the job interview still remained fresh in my mind . 二 Dear Dairy , Here I am in the middle of a city ,350 miles far away from our farmhouse .Do you want to know why we move last week ? Dad lost his job ,and as Mom explained ,“He was lucky to find other one ” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world .To make matters bad ,now I have to share a room with my younger sister ,Maggie .Tomorrow is first day of school .I am awfully tiring , but I know I’ll never fall sleep . Good night and remember , you , dear diary , is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. 三 Today I’d like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park .In the afternoon of last Sunday ,my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park ,when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river .We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out .Then we made him to breathe using the mouth-to –mouth way .Before the boy came to himself , we sent her to hospital at once and telephone his parents .The boy was saved .His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid .We realized that knowing first aid is very help and important because it can help you to save lives . 四 When we heard it was John birthday this Friday ,we decide we were holding a surprise party for him . We will gather at the Students’ Club on 5 pm that day after the school .You each will bri