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Harbin Institute of Technology Shenzhen Graduate School Comprehensive English Week 9 and 10 Liam D. Murphee, M.Ed New Office Hours Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday 2:30 to 4:30 pm Liam D. Murphee, M.Ed Christmas Choir and Angel Choir圣诞节合唱面试 Tryouts /articles/2009/12-23/121440389.htm Tuesday Nov 9th, 7pm Room A509 Choir Tryouts Tuesday Nov 9th, 7pm Room A509 Music to Prepare for Tryout will be uploaded to the QQ group next week Weekly Presentation Groups Review:What is a Thesis Statement? Outlining the Essay Page 108 I. THESIS STATEMENT [NOTE: Only the thesis statement goes in the outline’s introduction] Concrete Support in an Outline Do NOT put concrete support anywhere in this paragraph! II. BODY A. Topic Sentence (subtopic 1) 1. Your words as a support sentence here CONCRETE SUPPORT (cited) (Charts and graphs are encouraged!!) 2. Another example in your own words CONCRETE SUPPORT (cited) CONCRETE SUPPORT from 2nd source (cited) Conclusion –your final thought on this subtopic (preferred but optional) Concrete Support in an Outline II. BODY A. Rural migration’s effect on housing 1. Housing shortage caused by migration Statistic from U.S. gov. report online Chart from book 2. House prices up Quote from gov. official CNN online Chart from newspaper (housing prices in Shenzhen 10 years ago and now) Conclusion –effect on housing is getting worse Concrete Support in an Outline EXAMPLE The 1st Rough Draft 114 The first draft is written directly from the outline in the writing notebook. It should be double-spaced (skip a blank line between written lines) It should be done quickly. Only the thesis statement and the body paragraphs are required for a 1st draft First, make corrections and elaborations 拟订 in your notebook in the empty space between your lines of writing. Next, write your second draft (1st revision) in the notebook and then type it into the computer and print it. After that, re-read your paper several times for grammatical errors and mark them.