炼句技巧().ppt

炼句技巧（之二） 同义珠玑 独到措辞 动词突破 她获得数千元报酬为那本杂志做全裸画页。 She was paid several thousand dollars to take all her clothes off for the magazine. She was paid several thousand dollars to bare all for the magazine. (√) 我为什么要为你受穷？ (√) Why should I live in poverty for you? Why should I baggar myself for you? 听到这消息着实让我大吃一惊。 (√) I was astonished after hearing the news. Hearing the news really knocked me back. 约翰很热心，愿意帮忙。 John was very kind to be willing to help. John was very keen to help. （如果例句中文改成“约翰热心帮忙”，keen的用法在这里就是理所当然了。） 很多昆虫有黑色和黄色的条纹。（？） Many insects have black and yellow stripes. Many insects ar