荷塘月色(译文赏析)-个人赏析标记版.docx

荷塘月色Moonlight over the Lotus Pond朱自清??????????? 朱纯深 译Zhu Ziqing?????? trans. by Zhu Chunshen这几天心里颇不宁睁。今晚在院子里坐着乘凉，忽然想起日日走过的荷塘，在这满月的光里，总该另有一番样子吧。月亮渐渐地升高了，墙外马路上孩子们的欢笑，已经听不见了；妻在屋里拍着闰儿，迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌。我悄悄地披了大衫，带上门出去。It has been rather disquieting these days. Tonight, when I was sitting in the yard enjoying the cool, it occurred to me that the Lotus Pond, which I pass by every day, must assume quite a different look in such moonlit night.1 A full moon was rising high in the sky; the laughter of children playing outside had died away; in the room, my wife was patting the son, Run-er, sleepily?humming?a cradle song. Shrugging on an overcoat2, quietly, I made my way out, closing the door behind me.不经意间的回忆想起，也可谓心血来潮，经由occur，表现出来；荷塘另一幅景象的表现方式由assume生动阐述—---呈现，这只是作者的猜测，且具有客观性；“披上”这一动作，作者使用shrug-----耸耸肩将大衣披挂在肩上这一慵懒随意的细枝末节生动地表现了出来；沿着荷塘是一条曲折的小煤屑路。这是一条幽僻的路；白天也少人走，夜晚更加寂寞。荷塘四面，长着许多树，翁翁郁郁的。路的一旁，是些杨柳，和一些不知道名字的树。没有月光的晚上，这路上阴森森的，有些怕人。今晚却很好，虽然月光也还是淡淡的。Alongside the Lotus Pond runs a small cinder footpath. It is peaceful and?secluded?here, a place not frequented by pedestrians even in the daytime; now at night, it looks more solitary, in a lush, shady ambience of trees all around the pond.3 On the side where the path is, there are willows,?interlaced?with some others whose names I do not know. The foliage, which, in a moonless night, would loom somewhat frighteningly dark, looks very nice tonight, although the moonlight is not more than a thin, grayish veil.3灵活运用英语中复句，将汉语情况下具有相关性的分句描写，利用语法规则，嵌套入具有文学性的英语修饰性长句中路上只我一个人，背着手踱着。这一片天地好像是我的；我也像超出了平常的自己，到了另一世界里。我爱热闹，也爱冷静；爱群居，也爱独处。4像今晚上，一个人在这苍茫的月下，什么都可以想，什么都可以不想，便觉是个自由的人。白天里一定要做的事，一定要说的话，现在都可不理。这是独处的妙处；我且受用这无边的荷香月色好了。I am on my own, strolling, hands behind my back. This bit of the universe seems in my possession now; and I myself seem to have been uplifted from my ordinary self into another world. I like a serene and peaceful life, as much as a busy and active one; I like being in?solitude, as much as in company.4 As it is tonight, basking in a misty moon