2013年6月英语四级作文范文及分析.docxVIP

2013年6月英语四级作文范文及分析第一部分：考试分析一：形式1. 有图片，图片要点为：一对父子就一个问题展开讨论；2，英文提示：a 简要描述图片；b 给出有关于主题“the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”的观点二．写作应对1. 简要描述图片：简要描述，即，描述图中主题，并引出相关的主题即可，故可以结合考研春季基础班讲义，使用描述句式如下：A：简单型As we can see from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son.B：复杂型As is vividly depicted in the picture, two men ，who are a father and his son，are talking about what should be done firstly，the small thing or the big ones.Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.2. 判断写作类型：题干中有明显的两种观点，即先做小事，或者大事，只不过，出题人要求学生写的是关于先做小事的重要的意义，故可以使用两种观点对立的“观点分型”写作模板带入如下：第一段：说明现象第二段：观点讨论第三段：观点总结3. 主题该主题，可以被分为三个部分，即：A：the importance of doing small things before undertaking something bigB：doing small thingsC: doing something big以上三个内容在每段中确保出现1-2次，该作文便不跑题。第二部分：例文写作与模板对比第一段：描述图片+说明现象As we can see from the picture，there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.（原有模板）Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of …… has arouse wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth, ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.第二段：观点讨论Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not，actually,opinions vary from person to person.Some maintain that the doing some big is beneficial to students.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doin