高考英语高分作文“四要素”.docVIP

高考英语作文高分“四要素” 书面表达高分作文要求： 1. 覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 - 要素要素 一：?内容完整?、相关 备考策略：列提纲、写主题句 题目：中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。 提示： 1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他； 2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资源； 3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。 要求：1、词数120左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数。 2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。 How can we organize the passage? Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 要素二： 行文连贯，结构严谨 备考策略：正确使用过渡语 表 and，both…and，as well as，as well, also, neither…nor，or，either…or 表 besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover, not only…,but also…, for one thing…for another, what’s more/worse, worse still 表 however, while, but, yet, still, in spite of, despite, on the contrary, on one hand…, on the other hand, nevertheless 表 for example, such as, in other words, as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, that is to say, 表 therefore, thus, hence, otherwise, thanks to..., due to..., owe…to, consequently, accordingly, as a result, for the reason that…, so that 表 personally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned/ know, as we all know, As far as I can see…, It seems to me that…/ from my point of view… 表 in a word, in short, in brief, as has been stated, as I have shown, We can safely draw a conclusion that…, all in all, on the whole 表 first, second, third, last/firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally/the first, the second, the third, the last/in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly/to begin with, then, furthermore, finally/to start with, next, finally/first and foremost, last but not least, most important of all 表 first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while, at last 请为下面两段话加上合适的过渡语： 1、The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up. 2、We should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form the good habit. We should start wi