GRE写作满分范文赏析(一)-智课教育旗下智课教育GRE写作满分范文赏析(一)-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 GRE写作满分范文赏析（一）-智课教育旗下智课教育 为了帮助同学们顺利的考过GRE写作考试，小编为同学们编辑整理 了一套GRE写作满分范文赏析，希望能为各位考生提供实质性的帮助。 下面就是小编为同学们汇总整理的GRE写作满分范文赏析，同学们 可以先看一下。资料中有很多的作文表达的都非常的赞，中间有一些精 彩的GRE写作句子和语法，同学们可以积累下来可以好好的研读一下。 【题目】 The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Ballmer Island Gazette: “On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island’s moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville’s town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.” Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation. 【满分范文赏析】 【第一段】 The author of this editorial recommends that, to reduce accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, Balmer Island’s city council should restrict moped rentals from 50 to 25 per day, at each of the island’s six rental outlets. To support this recommendation the author cites the fact that last year, when nearby Seaville Island’s town council enforced similar measures, Seaville’s rate of moped accidents decreased by 50%. There are several reasons why this evidence fails to substantiate the claim. 【本段结构】 本段采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即C—E—F的开头结构 。段落首先概括原文的Conclusion，接下来概括原文为支持其结论所引 用的Evidence，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文的Flaw， 即其Evidence不能证实其结论。 【本段功能】 本段作为Argument开头段，具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文 的结论，即 ：为减少涉