[解决方案]雅思作文---2011.ppt

IELTS WRITING Welcome to IELTS WRITING class! General Introduction 答题卡 答题卡 评分标准: 不是整体式的评分 是分项式评分(analytical scoring) TA---Task Achievement 完成任务 是否完成了写作要求： 分析图表所给出的数据 归纳图表的总体趋势和走向 并进行比较 数据的支持 TA---Task Achievement 完成任务 Your ability to describe diagrams and tables describe 与国内英语考试的图表作文比较 千万不要在作文里面发表自己的意见 复原出图表 语言可准备 四级作文真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1. 上图所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化 2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）； 3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 TR---Task Response 任务反应 能否完整地、以恰当的方式完成题目中提出的 写作任务: 考生的论点是否切中题目的要求 论证过程是否完整 论点是否得到了论据的支持 考生的观点是否清晰和有效 CC--- Coherence Cohesion 连贯与衔接 文章通过一定的衔接手段(Cohesive Devices)来表明上下文的连贯性(Coherence)。 Your ability to communicate your ideas clearly 中文：形散神不散 英文：衔接手段 ????????? Between paragraphs ????????? Between features ????????? Within sentences Your ability to develop an argument supported by evidence Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work，so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job s worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team. LR--- Lexical Resource 词汇来源：词汇是否变化、准确 GRA--- Grammatical Range Accuracy 语法（句式）多样性及准确性 The range and accuracy