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商务写作 文章整洁的法宝　　对于BEC写作 有很多同学在学习和写文章时候比较吃力 下面我就和大家分享一些关于BEC写作方面的小知识 希望对大家以后写文章有所帮助　　我们现在推最新优惠课程 有想报课程的同学 可以咨询我们网站客服人员　　大学时我上了不少写作课，但是最有用的还是商务写作课。我和同学用了一学期的时间不断地修改那些杂乱无章的信件，备忘录和其他专业材料。下面是7条简单的建议，让大家学会清楚简洁的写作。　　1. Avoid very.　　1.避免使用“very”。　　It smacks of laziness and indicates your sentence needs editing to pack a stronger punch. For example, consider: The very tall man strode to the front of the line. The phrase very tall doesnt help a reader understand if the man is six feet tall or having to duck seven-foot doorways. How about: Standing a head taller than everyone in the room the man strode to the front of the line. The second version paints a better picture, right?　　用“very”会显得你懒惰，表明你的语句还需要修改以达到更加有力的程度。比如：“这个很高的男人跨步上前。”“很高”并没有帮助读者理解这个男人是否有6英尺高或者进7英尺高的门都需要低头。再比如：“比房间里所有人都高一个头的男人跨步上前了。”第二句是不是比上一句更能给人一种画面感?　　2. Limit prepositions when possible。　　2.尽量少用介词。　　If you dont remember what they are, heres a list and primer. When overused, prepositions can weaken writing and contribute to wordiness. For example: The meeting on December 1 about the budget is sharper when written The December 1 budget meeting. Also watch out for prepositions following a verb, such as come up with or find out. Instead, you could use generate or determine, respectively。　　如果你不记得了，下面是一些简单的例子。如果过度使用介词，会降低写作质量，造成冗余。比如：“关于预算的会议在12月1日召开”就没有“12月1日开预算会议”来的简洁有力。动词后面的介词也需要特别留意。比如“come up with”(想出)或“find out”(找出)，你就可以分别用“generate”和“determine”代替。　　3. Watch out for forms of the verb to be such as am, are, is, was, were, being, and been。　　3.注意不定式当中be动词的形式，如am, are, is, was, were, being, 和been。?BEC培训　　Usually you should aim for an active, not passive voice. There are three things you can do to improve your golf game is tighter when written three things can improve your golf game.　　通常你应该写主动句而不是被动句。“有三种方法可以提高你的高尔夫技术。”就没有“这三种方法可以提高你的高尔夫技术”这句话来的紧凑。　　4. Read it out loud。　　4.大声地读出来。　　Before delivering your writing to a recipient, read it out loud. Doing so will likely oust any typos, missing words, or other errors you m