2012广东高考英语读写任务专家评分.ppt

2012年高考真题 高考阅卷评分说明 专家评分 全省平均分11.94分 考生作文20 专家评分： 4+19 考生作文21 专家评分: 4+19 考生作文22 专家评分: 4+19 专家评分: 4+18 考生作文23 * 第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分） 阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life. In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!” What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health. [写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法, 内容包括： （1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师； （2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响； （3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。 读写任务是有材料作文: 要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文；主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。 本试题要求考生阅读一篇英文短文之后, 就老师影响学生的话题谈谈考生的想法, 内容包括： （1）文段使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师； （2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响； （3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。 评分时，应注意以下几点： 1. 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分； 2. 概括应包括以下要点： (1) The author’s husband received a letter a month ago. (2) In the letter the student expressed her thanks to the teacher for encouraging her to study math. (3) The author was touched by the letter. 3. 写作内容应该包括： （1）具体哪位老师对你帮助最大； （2）该老师对你的影响。比如：激发起你对某门学科的兴趣、鼓励你克服学习中的困难、劝你不要骄傲自满、劝你改掉不良习惯等； （3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响, 比如：培养浓厚的学习兴趣; 性格变得更加坚强、学会与朋友和谐相处、懂得如何做人等。 考生作文 考生作文1 专家评分：4+15 考生作文 2 专家评分：3+13 考生作文3 专家评分： 4+20 考生作文4 专家评分： 2+13 考生作文 5 专家评分： 2+11 考生作文 6 专家评分： 3+16 考生作文 7 专家评分： 3+14