中科院考博英语 培训资料（作文） sentence correction.pptVIP

Writing correction ----总的说来，立意都还可以，能够言之成理。 * Some suggestions: 1. 应试作文除非写明了要加标题，一般是不须自己拟题目的。可以用铅笔写作，便于修改。 2。最大的感受：要多背诵一些范文，以增加词汇量和用来表达思想的句式。否则语言会很贫乏，阅读起来干巴巴的，留不下什么好印象。 3。对于不太熟悉的句型和词组，要慎用。宁可用自己有把握的，也不要在关键时候拿自己的前途来冒险。除非你见过某种用法，否则不要自己造出来用。 4。用词时注意一下词的词性，否则白白丢分。掌握常用动词的名词形式很有必要。 5。以少失分为原则，没有把握的不要用，克制一下要炫耀的想法。 * 6。所有的标点符号都不能放在一行字的开头，除非是引号或书名号。 7。要用清晰的语言表达清晰的思想。不能空洞无物。 8。好的书写决不是可有可无的点缀—它是必须的。 9。加强语法基础，绝大部分是由于语法基础不牢固而失分。 * Sentence correction-- 1. Eg. Only if we take a further step forward in education reforms, the whole education system will turn into a sound and highly effective one gradually. 语法：当only引导从句或短语放在句首时，主句主谓要倒装。如不放在句首，则不倒装。 Correction—Only if we take a further…, will the whole education system turn into a sound and highly effective one gradually. 2. (mistakes) Only do so, everyone will try his best. (correction) Only by doing so, will everyone try his best. * Common mistakes 3. For it can improve our country’s economic development as well as enhance the quality of people. -----------as well as enhancing…(As is a preposition word) As well as: (1)除…之外也；和 Hiking is good exercises as well as fun.徒步旅行很有趣味，也是很好的锻炼。 (2). 和… 一样 He would like to go as well as you。 他和你一样想去。 就近一致的原则：当主语是用 等连接的并列主语时，谓语动词与最接近的成分保持一致。 Not only the students but also the teaching staff has been influenced by this innovation. * Only if if only 1. Only if=只有当… 时才会… E.g., Only if you master English, can you write well in English. ----If only:要是…… 该有多好！（虚拟语气） If only I can fly! 2. Not only…but also (use equivalent structures between each other) 3.It is high time that…(use past tense, remember!) * 句型与用法 1. As I see it, it is time to renovate our education, moreover this innovation should be continued. ( C )…, and this innovation should be carried on for a long time. 慎用表示递进的词汇。 2. I’m fully convinced that…/ of sth. 3. To develop economy depends on our people especially those with university education. (C ) Developing economy depends on….with university degree. 将本来是两句的，混在一个句子里 4. I