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专题五　短文改错 第三讲　逻辑类错误 真题验证 (2017·全国Ⅲ) When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. 答案： When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I grown not only physically， also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was ，I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days. 　解析：删除of。考查介词。realize后接宾语从句，介词of多余。 　解析：had改为have。考查时态。由时间状语“in the past few years”可知，此处强调的是发生在过去的动作对现在的影响，故应用现在完成时。 　解析：and改为but。考查连词。not only...but also...是固定搭配。 　解析：took改为taken。考查语态。photo与take为被动关系，故应用被动语态。take的过去分词是taken。 　解析：become改为became。考查动词时态。“我”进入高中第二学年并成为学校音乐俱乐部的新成员这一系列动作发生在过去，所以谓语动词应用became。 　解析：picture前面加this或者the。考查限定词/冠词。picture作“照片”之意讲时是可数名词，因为上文已提到过这张照片，因此要用定冠词the表特指，或者用this。 　解析：they改为that或which。考查定语从句。things是个名词，后面接了一个定语从句，修饰先行词things，既可以用that也可以用which作关系代词。 　解析：difference改为different。考查形容词。名词kinds前需要形容词来修饰，因此把名词difference改为形容词different。 　解析：late改为latest。考查形近词辨析。结合句意，这里表示收集最新的音乐专辑，故将late改为latest。 　解析：your改为my。考查人称指代一致。全文介绍的是“我”的故事，因此这里应该是“我”高中时期的回忆。 (2016·全国Ⅲ) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the firs