2011年医学考博英语写作.docVIP

第一部分 医学考博写作简介 摘要写作概况 例句： 随着现代医疗科技的发展，越来越多的疾病找到了治疗方式。 With the development of modern medical science and technology, surgeons/doctors have found cures for more and more diseases.（正） As developping of modren medical science and techonlogy, more and more diseases find cures.（误） 单词的记忆与应用 单词怎么背？ 背准单词的四个方面： 1、读音 2、外形 3、词义 4、用 练习：practice 对写作的整体认识 认识两个人：出题的和改卷的 1、出题的：a. 内容：医学科普文章 b. 形式 c. 时间和字数：50分钟；约200词 2、改卷的： 高分策略：1、字迹清楚；段落明朗 2、要点完整；紧扣提纲 3、首保正确；再求闪光 4、主体段落；先总后分 5、语句连贯；连词用上 评分实例 实例一 　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 　　1．当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。 　　2．诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 1. In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? 　　Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again． 　　So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social．（11分） 2. Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams． 　　Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money a