89-《2012江苏高考说明》高考英语书面表达示例2---看图作文（亦为....pptVIP

四档范文的修改 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. As it is illustrated in this picture, the tired mom just went home from work. The little girl helps remove her mother’s heavy bag from her shoulder. The mother is looking at her good girl with a smile while the little girl is also wearing a smile. She feels delightful and proud that she can do something for her mother. It is just a moving picture. Seeing the touching picture, I realize that I always think much of myself but less of my parents. As their child, I seldom concentrate on what they need and feel. Now I think we should relieve them of too much burden. For example, we should give them a hand when they are doing housework. What’s more, we can also tell them some funny jokes to make them feel relaxed when they are tired or worried. In a word, it is our duty to share parents’ daily burden.(153words) 实例二 请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。 注意：1.词数150左右。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照　 revoke a driving license 1.认真看图，确立主题 结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。 四幅图记述了昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是：昨天叔叔酒后开车，出事故而受伤，被吊销驾照。 2.围绕主题，提炼要点 围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出每幅图的要点。 第一幅图：与朋友聚会，喝酒 第二幅图：酒后驾车 第三幅图：出事故受伤 第四幅图：住院 。警察到场处罚。 3.合理想象，补出要点 将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想 象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。 第一幅图：喝酒的地点（可能在朋友家，也可能在小酒馆），根据喝酒的地点确定是谁邀请谁。可能因为高兴叔叔酒喝多了喝醉了（为下文铺垫） 第二幅图：根据他说的话：No problem可以推断：朋友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家。 第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象开车的情况：蜿蜒向前，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是受了伤。警察到现场，将他送往医院。 第四幅图：因伤势严重要住院几天；警察对他处罚吊销驾照。 4.确定时态，译出要点 确定表达时所用的正确时态，将围绕主题初选出的要点和经过合理想象补出的要点翻译出来。 本篇书面表达是记述的昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，故用过去时态来表达。 第一幅图： Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk. 第二幅图： After the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didn’t to listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so. 第三幅图： He got into the car and drove away.A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street.And sudden