2003《写作160篇》-研究生考试.pdfVIP

太阳城考研1 号英语 英语一写作书 《写作160 篇》 2003 年真题作文 Directions: 温室花朵经不起风雨Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1. describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and 2. point out its implications in our life. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points) 两幅图画形成了鲜明的对比。同为暴风雨天气，左图中的花朵因为有温室的庇护，依然娇艳 动人；右图中的花朵暴露在风雨之中，很快便枯萎凋谢。不难发现，这组名为“温室花朵经 不起风雨”的图画采用了象征手法：花朵实为我国的年轻一代，温室即为父母的溺爱和过度 保护，风雨则代表了现实生活中的挫折和困难。显然，这组图画寓意着在溺爱和过度保护中 长大的孩子经不起逆境的考验。本次的写作主题鲜明，发挥联想的空间很大。 第一段：描述图画。可对两组图画进行对比描述，重笔墨于有无温室庇护时，花朵的不同状 况。 第二段：揭示寓意。指出父母溺爱及过度保护子女这一社会现象，并分析该现象对年轻一代 的成长产生的不利影响。 第三段：总结评论。既可以正面提出建议，也可以对当前教育观念中存在的弊病加以批评。 As is vividly depicted in the drawings, inside the greenhouse stands a delicate and charming flower, protected from lightning and storms. However, when moved out of the greenhouse, it fades and withers in the storm. It is obvious that the flower in the greenhouse cant withstand stormy weather. The drawings remind us of the young generation in China, who, like the flower in the greenhouse, lives under the wings of parents. Most Chinese parents are compared to the greenhouse. They devote themselves to child-raising, sheltering their children from this competitive society where the fittest survive. Lots of teens, therefore, become self-centered, headstrong and dependent on others. Whats worse, these pampered children are susceptible to anxiety and even depression in response to failure and frustration. Apparently, this way of parenting makes the future tougher forthe young generation. Flowers in the greenhouse fail to weather wind and rain forever; it is life alone that can invisiblly hone their will. Deeply anxious parents should untie their children, cultivate their self- confidence, and help them to learn how to cope with many challenges further effectively.And yet, young people should also go out of “the greenhouse” to keep pace with growth.正如图画中