英语八级_校对与改错练习.docVIP

校对与改错（91-95试卷） PROOFREADING ERROR CORRECTION Passage One It is very difficult ∧ imagine an educational system which transmits 1. to values seriously in conflict with that of the government and the state, or 2. those which contributes nothing to training young people for their future adult work-roles. However, educational systems are often only partial successful. 3. partially This is partly because people have different views of what elements of culture (norms and values) should be stressed (on), and what skills are useful. 4. on Such disagreement has a fundamental basis in ∧ social structure of modem 5. the Britain because there is often a contradiction among the two functions of 6. between socialization and training. This is because the two functions are not easily separate in practice. The norms and values transmitted to any group of 7. separated children have to be somehow relating to the kinds of skills they 8. related ∧ taught. The culture of the aristocracy is not the same as that of working 9. are -class neighborhoods in the inner cities. Similarly, training for different sorts of work need to be different: to be proficient in Latin is not useful 10. needs to the shop assistant, just as expertise in woodwork is irrelevant to a university teacher. Passage Two As people live in a fast-moving world where tensions build up, the effects of long-distance running are uplifting. Each hill is approached as a positive challenge, causing the runner to grow strongly with each stride and leading him to tranquility and harmony. 1. stronger Long-distance running (that) helps a person to forget pressure on family 2. that problems as well as job related annoyances. An example comes quickly in 3. to mind. One day I had a really terrible fight with my landlady over some foolish incident. I screamed and yelled at her but she very nearly threw me out. A