全国出国培训备选人员英语水平考试（BFT） 作文讲评.ppt

作文讲评 常州市委组织部BFT班 General Comments 文章的体裁是议论文，能基本上按照要求写 应在第一段说明个人的观点，然后在正文部分证明自己的观点 有的支撑论文不相干 开头太突然，缺少铺垫 没有合理分段 语言表述问题 * * Firstly, you pay much less money for the house you rent than that you buy when you sign the contract with the owner of the house. I agree the viewpoint that buying a house makes better sense than renting one. Secondly, people buying houses would feel much comfortable than ones who rent houses. On the contrary, renting houses means people have to expend much money to pay for rent. 5. In the most of time buying a house makes better sence in the long run than renting one. 6. Renting a house also costs me. I prefer to concentrate this amout of money on buying one. 7. What may you imagine if you have your own house? Exactly, let us start our action—buy our own houses. Above all, I think that Buying a house is quite better than renting one. 10. If you have saved money which can afford a house and enjoy a steady income, the buy one. But actually, buying a house have disadvantages too, the main of them is that perhaps you will cost much more than renting a house, after all, … Actually, you just paid once to buy a house, whatever made you pay by cash or credit. The second, I have a lot of friends, some of them are very weathy. I can borrow some money from my generous friends. *