全国出国培训备选人员英语水平考试（BFT）作文讲评-组织部.ppt

作文讲评 江苏省委组织部培训班 General Comments 基本上能按信函格式回信，个别学员将日期写在最后 基本概括了指令的四个方面: thanking, apologizing, acting and promising 语言基本通顺，但仍存在较多的语言表述方面的问题 * * I have received your letter, and thanks for your patience. I do apologize for the mistake of our sending the paper and the ink to you. We wish can offer you another service if you approve when we have these goods in hands. I thanks you for you letter. I am sorry about the bottle was broken and the ink had damaged all six packs of paper, and having trouble with your job. I think, this is a warning to us to be more careful in our work. I appreciate you very much for your writing letter to us. 8. , and find out the reason which cause the thing occurring. It is our faulse. I am regret that the ink bottles you orded broke and made the photocopys could not be used. I am very appreciated to receive your letter which give some advice about our items. I promise the same thing likes last is not be found, and I and my men will give better service for you in future. I realy thank you again for your attention of our service and our goods. *