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Last week, I went to the theatre. I had a very good seat. The play was very interesting. I did not enjoy it. A young man and a young woman were sitting behind me. They were talking loudly. I got very angry. I could not hear the actors. I turned round. I looked at the man and the woman angrily. They did not pay any attention. In the end, I could not bear it. I turned round again. I cant hear a word! I said angrily. Its none of your business, the young man said rudely. This is a private conversation! 一、审题: 确定基本要素:5W1H 何 何 何 为 如 何 时 地 人 何 何 事 When: _______ Who :_______ Where : _______ What: _______ 　　 Why: _______ 　 How: _______ Tense: The simple past tense. Today We Farm Visit Play Bus 二、抓要点 Key points： met ··· bus 　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　　　played chess danced ···sang　　 　told jokes ···stories had a picnic 关键词： 动词 三、扩展成句 常用连词: and、so/because、although/but however、not only···but also Who: met ···bus 　　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　played chess danced···sang　　 　 told jokes ···stories had a picnic 四、 连句成文 词与词搭配 　　句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾 　　　　　　　　　五、 查错改错 时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序问题 是否符合语言习惯　 固定短语 We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head of the farm showed we around. We were happy to see the crops and vegetables grew well. At noon we had a picnic lunch. After a short rest, we have great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a well time. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 找错并改正: a met at the school gate and bus us growing had good Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to