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课题 作文评讲（礼物） 总 1 课时 第 1 课时 教学内容 Comments on student’s works 教学目标 to get a general idea of the structure of a complete article 教学重点 Comments on the students works 教学难点 The structure of an article 教学过程 教学说明 I. Preparation: 1. Dictation 2. Homework checking II. Presentation 题目：以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容： 1、你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物； 2、该礼物对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 (1) 审题 (2) 评分标准 （3）文章结构 Section One: Head Sample 1: Gifts are the things which is full of love. Just like I deliveres gift to my grandparents every year when they have birthday. I gave presents to them not only to prove my love but also show that although they are old, I still thank them and remember them. 改错 评价 ※ 语法错误、表达不准确 ※ 未进入话题，偏题 ※ 开头太长、不简洁 Sample 2: In this summer holiday, my best friends went abroad from England to study. I wouldn’t like to leave her, but I know this idea is helpful for her. I ready the most important present to sell her. It is a camera. 改错 评价 ※ Chinglish ※ 词汇的正确使用 ※ 语法错误 Sample 3: recently，I’m thinking about what I can buy for Susan who is my best friend. Because her birthday is coming. After a long-time thinking, I decide to buy some books for her. Because she loves reading very much. 改错 评价 ※ 需使用不同句式 ※ Chinglish Section Two: Body Sample 1: In the evening, we had a dinner together and sang a “happy birthday” song to my grandmother. At last, I gave my gift to grandma and when she got the gift, She was very surprise, because this is my first gift to her. I stand between my grandma and grandfather. I looked at my grandma. Then said with smile, Grandma, you can see it!?She looked the gift which was wrapped up in color paper and put the box out of the paper carefully. Then she happily. I said: 揌appy birthday and I love you dear grandma!擨 think itnd’s a wonderful day. 改错 评价 ※ 语言错误 ※ 严重偏题 Sample 2: I think, I will give my mother a bike as her gift. And I believe it will make she some changes. First, going to work by bike is more convenience than by bus. Seco