2013书面表达.pptVIP

Types of writing: 1. Narration 记叙文 2. Exposition 说明文 3. Argumentation议论文 Step 1: Guiding learn to arrange the structure learn to write a good sentence learn to write a good paragraph learn to use transitions between ideas 1. learn to write a good sentence  1.句子要正确：1).Do you know where is the  People’s Park ? 2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish. →Many visitors enjoy the dish. →There are many visitors who enjoy the dish. 2.句子要平行 In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. 3.句子要连贯 Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the stream. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. 5.句子要避免过多重复 You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake. →After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake. 6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects. →The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. 7.句子要避免汉式英语My spare loves are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music. →In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,…… →In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating…… →In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating…… Tips: 切忌表达单一 例1:过去十年我的家乡发生了很大变化。 例2:他很自信，相信自己能做好一切事情。 Tips:适当使用复杂句式 a. I like the film very much. I want to see the film again. b. He spends so much time playing computer games. He failed in most of his lessons. 2. learn to write a good paragraph 3.learn to arrange the structure 4. learn to use transitions between ideas Some common transitions: 1）时间顺序 first, second, then, next, finally, soon, immediately, suddenly 2）举例 ?????? for example, such as, take…for example 3）转折 ?????? bu