unit-1-建议信.pptVIP

Unit 1 Friendship 写作训练与指导 Week 1 建议信 例题展示：（2014年安徽）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是该栏目的编辑Jamine,收到了一封署名为Worried 的求助信。 信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，让正常的生活和学习受到了影响。请用英文写一封回信。 Hi, Worried, I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. And I’m willing to help to get out of the situation. Here are my suggestions for you. First of all, the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step. Having realized that your time is limited, you’ll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. Secondly, If I were you, I would take a walk in the evening with my friends. Moreover, listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start. In the end, kid as we are, it’s our duty to control ourselves, which will greatly help your lives and study. I sincerely hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. Yours, Jamine 语言积累： 1.significant adj. 重要的，意义深远的，有重大意义的 2. moreover adv.而且，此外。 The new manager is intelligent and hardworking. Moreover, he is very charming. 建议信的写作攻略 1)建议信是对收信人关于某是提出建议和忠告. 2)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由. 建议的内容,和原因要合情合理,语气一定要缓和. 3)建议信要简明扼要,目的明确,合情合理,且要有说服力. 满分模板 Dear Bob, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________(引出对方需要建议的主题）. Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议）. First, it’s important to ______________.Then , it also helps to __________ . Besides, it should be a good idea to ___________.You can also_________________. (根据要求用不同的句式表达）. As to ___________, I suggest __________(有时根据需要要提到另一方面）. In addition, _________(其他的建议）. I’m sure _______________(预测可能的结果， 对方以行动的信心和决心）. I’m looking forward to _________(表达愿望）./ I hope you will find the suggestions useful. Yours sincerely, Lihua 夺人眼球