[高考]高考英语短文改错解析7.ppt

 7 　Exercise 5 After I finished the school this year, I began to 1. _______ 删去the。冠词错误。finish school意为“完成学业， 毕业”， school为抽象名词， 前不加冠词。 look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn’t2. _______ month改为months。名词单复数错误。several修饰可数名词复数形式。 found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning3. _______ interested后加in。介词错误。be interested in是固定词组。 I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. 4. _______ him改为himself。代词错误， 根据文意应为“自称是”。 He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very 5. _______ do改为did。动词错误。句意应为“我听说你(过去)学习不错”， 因为现已毕业。 well in your studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6. _______ 此行无错。 　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7. _______ beaten改为beating。非谓语动词错误。a beating heart相当于a heart which is beating。 will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would8. _______ will改为would。动词时态错误。主句是过去时， 宾语从句要用相应的时态。 take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9. _______ surprised改为surprise。to one’s surprise/joy为习语搭配， 只能是名词。 　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10. ______ said后加was。动词谓语漏用错误。What he said是主语从句， was disappointing是谓语。 Exercise 6 　　Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home. 1. _______ 删去to。home是副词， 前面不能接介词。 In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in 2. catching改为caught。主语it与catch的关系为被动关系， 故用was caught。 the bag by a shepherd(牧羊人) a few minutes ago.　The wolf asked the old man to let him out.3. _______ 此行无错。 The old man took pity on him and opened bag.4. _______ bag前加the。bag在此重复提到， 为特指。 When the wolf got out, said to the old man, “I am very hungry. 5. _______ said前加he。代词漏用错误。此句缺少主语， 并且要与上文him保持一致。 I want to eat you.” The other old man could do nothing 6. _______ 删去other。接上下文没有“另一个老人”。 and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this. 7. _______ and(cry)改为but(cry)。can do nothing but意为“只得做”， 为习惯搭配。 He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the 8. _______ by改为with。介词错误。“用……工具”常用“with...”。 old man, “wolves want to eat men all the time. It’s nature 9. ____