2014届高考英语一诊考前专题训练 短文改错系列1.doc

绵阳东辰国际学校2014届绵阳一诊考前专练：短文改错系列 短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 1 Dear Jim, Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. Id like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done. Looking forward to receiving your letter. Yours, Li Ping 2 It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free. China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for them. The Chinese once used about 300 million of plastic shopping bags a day, which has caused environmentally pollution because plastic bags are not easy to break down. So the Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea. They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use these cloth bags instead of plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help protecting the environment. 3 Dear Wang Ping, I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks before. I’ve been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies at abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is bad needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy of you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people