高一作文讲解 (人物类 ).doc

With the development of society, 随着社会的发展 With the development of technology, 随着科技的发展 With the popularity of computer, 随着电脑的普及 基础写作(One possible version) Dear Jim, ? With National Day coming, I plan to journey to Qingdao. As one of the co-cities which hosted the 29th Olympics in 2008, Qingdao attracts millions of people from all over the world each year. It is an important port city in China, and is also one of the top ten business cities. The annual Beer Festival has become the city’s most famous cultural event.  I plan to stay there for four days and travel with a tour group.  ? Yours, ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Li Hua As time goes by, With time going by, With time passing by, With National Day approaching, With National Day drawing near, 基础写作(One possible version) Usain Bolt, who was born on August 21, 1986 comes from Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall . He is not only hard-working, nut also full of love and determined. In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2009, in the World Championship in Berlin he broke his own world records for the 100-meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records. 1986年8月21号：on August 21, 1986 北京奥运会：the Beijing Olympic Games 打破世界纪录：break world records 100米和200米世界纪录： 100-meter and 200-meter world records 世界锦标赛：the World Championship 实现做什么的梦想：realize/achieve one’s dream of doing sth 典型错误： 1. Usain Bolt who was born on August 21, 1986 in Jamaica. 2. He was born on August 21, 1986, he was a world champion in running. 怎样写出优美的句子？ He was born on August 21, 1986. He was a world champion in diving. 学会用定语从句美化句子： He was a world champion in rinning， who was born on August 21, 1986 . 学会用分词作状语美化句子： Born on August 21, 1986, he was a world champion in running. Usain Bolt was born on August 21, 1986 in Jamaica. He is