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公共选修进阶课程 翻译导论 授课教师：杨晓华（高级翻译学院） 修课时间：2014年3月-6月 提交日期：2014年6月9日 【小组成员】 项目组长： 联系电话: 姓名 院系名称 专业 年级（班级） 学号 备注 翻译任务：英汉翻译 【原文】 题目（四号字，黑体） （与正文空行，正文小四字号） 英文采用Times New Roman 【小组译文】 题目（四号字，黑体） （与正文空行，正文小四字号） 中文采用新宋体。注明不同译者） 【翻译日志】 （根据本课程所提供的翻译流程和译文评审的四组问题用汉语撰写300-500字的翻译日志：反思翻译过程，综述问题求解方案等） 1. Translation Process during Project Execution 2. Revision Parameters After initial translation (either human translation followed by self-checking or automatic translation by a computer, called machine translation, followed by post-editing by a human) a translation that is intended for publication is typically revised and reviewed. Revision is a bilingual process involving a comparison of the source text and the target text, while review is a monolingual process involving an examination of the target text by a subject matter expert. Revision parameters are the things a reviser checks for--the types of error. An exhaustive listing of things that can go wrong when translating would be very long indeed. However in order to think about and discuss revision, it is convenient to have a reasonably short list of error types. Group A - Problems of meaning transfer (Transfer) 1. Does the translation reflect the message of the source text ( Accuracy)? 2. Have any elements of the message been left out? ( Completeness ) Group B - Problems of content (Content) 3. Does the sequence of ideas make sense: Is there any nonsense or contradiction? (Logic ) 4. Are there any factual errors? ( Facts ) Group C - Problems of language and style (Language) Does the text flow: Are the connections between sentences clear? Are the relationships among the parts of each sentence clear? Are there any awkward, hard-to-read sentences? (Smoothness) Is the language adapted to the users of the translation and the use they will make of it? (Tailoring) Is the style suited to the genre, has correct terminology been used